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Metaphors and Similes — English Bac SMB

This is a writing skill scored directly in the Bac SMB English paper's essay (coefficient 2), where organisation and range earn marks. “Life is a journey” (metaphor) and “Life is like a journey” (simile) say almost the same thing with a different tool — a stylistic distinction the literary texts of the Bac make use of.

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English carries a coefficient of 2 in the Bac Sciences Maths B (SMB) stream, level with Philosophy. Mathematics dominates the stream (coefficient 9), followed by Physics-Chemistry and Engineering Sciences (coefficient 7 each), so English can look marginal — but it and Philosophy form the narrow margin where rankings and honours are actually decided. Reading, language and guided writing are all assessed.

في الامتحان

Three parts: Reading Comprehension, Language, and Writing (a guided text of about 180 words). SMB candidates, trained to be rigorous and systematic, do well on the Language section if they treat each grammar point as a rule with a fixed structure; the risk is a dry essay that ignores vocabulary range and register, which the Writing section also scores.

أهداف التعلم

  • Build this into a clear paragraph plan for the Bac SMB English essay (coefficient 2)
  • Define a simile: an explicit comparison using like or as … as
  • Define a metaphor: a direct identification of one thing with another, with no like or as
  • Spot metaphors and similes in a reading text and explain their effect
  • Use a simple metaphor or simile appropriately in your own writing

المفاهيم الأساسية

The simile: an explicit comparison

A simile compares two things openly with like or as … as: “She is as brave as a lion.”, “He ran like the wind.” The comparison word (like / as) is always present.

The metaphor: a direct identification

A metaphor states that one thing IS another, with no comparison word: “Time is money.”, “The classroom was a zoo.” It is stronger and more compact than a simile.

Spotting and using figures of speech

In a reading text, identify the two things being linked and explain what the image suggests (“describing the city as a jungle suggests danger and lawlessness”). In your own writing, one clear image is more effective than several strained ones.

الأخطاء الشائعة

1

Calling every comparison a metaphor: if like or as is present, it is a simile, not a metaphor.

2

Explaining a metaphor by just restating it: say what it suggests (“a heart of stone” = an unfeeling, hard character), not simply “it means his heart is stone”.

3

Overloading a paragraph with images: in an argumentative essay, one well-chosen figure of speech is enough; too many weaken the point.

مثال محلول

نص السؤال

Say whether each sentence is a metaphor or a simile, and explain the second one's effect: (1) “The news hit him like a hammer.” (2) “Her words were daggers.”

التصحيح

Sentence (1). It uses like, so it is a simile: the news is compared to a hammer.
Sentence (2). It states that the words WERE daggers, with no comparison word, so it is a metaphor.
Effect of (2). Identifying the words directly with daggers suggests they were sharp, deliberate and deeply hurtful — more forceful than saying “her words were like daggers”.

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التمرين 1

Easy
Metaphor or simile? “He is as stubborn as a mule.”
عرض التصحيح
Simile — it uses “as … as” to make the comparison explicit.

التمرين 2

Medium
Turn this simile into a metaphor: “My brother's room is like a battlefield.”
عرض التصحيح
“My brother's room is a battlefield.” — removing “like” turns the explicit comparison into a direct metaphor.

التمرين 3

Hard
Explain in one sentence what the metaphor “the ship ploughed the sea” suggests about the ship's movement.
عرض التصحيح
Comparing the ship's motion to a plough cutting through soil suggests slow, forceful, effortful progress that leaves a visible track behind it, rather than light or rapid movement.

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الأسئلة الشائعة

What is the quickest way to tell a metaphor from a simile?

Look for like or as … as. If it is there, it is a simile. If one thing is simply said to BE another, it is a metaphor.

Are metaphors and similes only tested in literature texts?

Mostly, but they also appear in journalistic and persuasive texts, and being able to name and explain them helps in reading-comprehension questions about the writer's style or tone.

Should I use figures of speech in a Bac essay?

A single, clear image can make a point memorable, but an argumentative essay is judged on reasoning and accuracy first — do not force imagery where a plain sentence works better.

A maths-stream student often dislikes English — how do they raise the mark?

Treat it as structure. Every writing task = introduction + argument + counter-argument + conclusion; every grammar point = one rule + one correct example + one typical mistake. Memorise that framework, apply it to the 31 chapters with two example sentences each, and 12/20 is reachable without eating into the heavy maths programme.

How does this skill affect the Bac SMB Writing mark?

Organisation and connective range are explicit scoring criteria. A paragraph that states an idea, links it clearly to a cause or a consequence, and closes it earns marks that a list of unconnected sentences does not.